The chart below shows the sales of handmade olive oil soaps to tourists in Turkey in 2015.
The given graph presented the sales of handcrafted soaps (produced in olive oil) to visitors in Turkey in 2015.
All in all, both the starting point and the end almost share similar data.
While
the purchases skyrocketed in March, they fell significantly in July and September 2015. All units are measured in millions of Turkish Lira.
Turkish olive oil soap makers sold 200 million
in January and increased gradually in the next month before reaching the highest number of the year with 350 million
worth of soaps in March 2015. Afterwards, the transactions decrease substantially until July.
Despite escalating numbers in August 2015, reaching 200 million
, the trend only continued briefly. Although
in September there was a dip (around 250 million
, similar to July), the trend rose slightly in October before hitting a plateau until the end of the year with approximately 175 million
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