The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by local authorities in Someland in 1980, 1990 and 2000.

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by local authorities 

in Someland in 1980, 1990 and 2000.
The
three
pie illustrate the changes in annual spending by local authorities in Someland in
three
different
years
.
Firstly
, thirty
five
per
cent
of total money was spent on the higher educationservices in nineteen eighy, which rose to forty
five
per
cent
in 1990, but saw a decline in two thousands and the per
cent
was forty. After that comes the K-12 learning sector and twenty
five
per
cent
of cost were made in 1980,
whereas
20 per
cent
of total money was budgeted in 90s and it was only eighteen per
cent
in 2000. In the transportation field, 16 per
cent
, six and twenty two per
cent
of total money were used to make changes in
three
years
respectively.
However
, the in-charge authority spent fourteen per
cent
on the health and human resources service in 80s, which was 6% higher in 90s and in two thousands it was 4 per
cent
less.
Furthermore
, the expenditure on department of green initiatives was four,
five
and nine per
cent
respectively, which is very less compared to other fields.
Finally
, in other sector, the percentage witnessed some decrease over the
years
from six to four per
cent
and only 1% remained in the
last
given period.
Overall
,
it is clear that
graduate school is the most yearly disbursement by local authorities in all
three
years
,
whereas
very least amount was allocated for the environmental services and other.
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  • allocation of budget
  • percentage distribution
  • annual spending
  • local authorities
  • sectors
  • increased funding
  • decreased funding
  • trends
  • socio-economic conditions
  • policies
  • expenditure
  • public services
  • financial priorities
  • budgetary adjustments
  • fiscal policies
  • discretionary spending
  • mandatory spending
  • inflation-adjusted
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