The graph below shows how money was spent on differentforms of entertainment.

The graph below shows how money was spent on differentforms of entertainment.
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The given bar charts depict how
money
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was spent on various forms of entertainment in Asia, Europe and the United States in 1995 and 2000. As a general trend, we can notice that most
money
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was spent on television and publishing across all areas and both in 1995 and 2000. At first glance, we can see that in 2000 more
money
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was spent in all regions in comparison to 1995. In Asia, 67
billion
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dollars
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was spent in 1995 and 110
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dollars
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in 2000.
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in Europe in 2000 was spent 34
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dollars
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more than in 1995. The biggest raise was in the United States: in 2000 was spent 73
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dollars
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more than in 1995. Now, turning to the details, the least amount of
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is spent on cinema, video and music. In total these three categories make up less than 50% of the market. In all three regions, the budget for television has increased in 2000 compared to 1995. In Asia and Europe, it increased slightly,
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, in the United States the budget for these two categories almost doubled from just over
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half of a
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to a hundred
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dollars
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, billion, dollars with synonyms.
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