The diagram below shows how paper is made and recycled.
The given diagram illustrates the process of creating and recycling
paper
. It can be seen that the process consists of eleven stages in total.
First of all, people need to cut down trees and Use synonyms
then
put wood pieces into a de-barking drum. Linking Words
After
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this
stage, it should be thermomechanically refined. Linking Words
Next,
it goes to a Linking Words
paper
-making machine with some water added. And Use synonyms
finally
, we have Linking Words
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paper
which can be used for newsprint, Add an article
a paper
for example
.
After old newsprints are collected, a new life for Linking Words
paper
begins. Use synonyms
Firstly
, it should be de-inked, Linking Words
then
cleaned and fine screened. The resulting mass goes through thermomechanical and recycled pulp mix. Linking Words
This
stage is followed by the only stage which is the same for both: Linking Words
firstly
created Linking Words
paper
and recycled Use synonyms
one
— adding water and putting the mass into a Correct pronoun usage
apply
paper
-making machine.
The process of Use synonyms
paper
recycling can be repeated an unlimited amount of times which is great as it helps humanity to give new life to old Use synonyms
paper
Use synonyms
instead
of deforestation.Linking Words
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