The diagram below shows how paper is made and recycled.
The given diagram illustrates the process of creating and recycling
paper
. It can be seen that the process consists of eleven stages in total.
First of all, people need to cut down trees and then
put wood pieces into a de-barking drum. After
this
stage, it should be thermomechanically refined. Next,
it goes to a paper
-making machine with some water added. And finally
, we have paper
which can be used for newsprint, Add an article
a paper
for example
.
After old newsprints are collected, a new life for paper
begins. Firstly
, it should be de-inked, then
cleaned and fine screened. The resulting mass goes through thermomechanical and recycled pulp mix. This
stage is followed by the only stage which is the same for both: firstly
created paper
and recycled one
— adding water and putting the mass into a Correct pronoun usage
apply
paper
-making machine.
The process of paper
recycling can be repeated an unlimited amount of times which is great as it helps humanity to give new life to old paper
instead
of deforestation.Submitted by nzgvrv on
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