The following graph shows the number of people (by age) attending cinema more than once a month.
The
provided
line graph below represents the percentage of Verb problem
apply
people
who visited cinema
at least once a month from 1984 to 2003.
Correct article usage
the cinema
It is clear that
the figures for adolescents and adults fluctuated dramatically during this
period. The
large proportion Correct article usage
A
juveniles
from 7 to 14 mostly joined the cinema in 1998 (nearly 40 Change preposition
of juveniles
percents
), Fix the agreement mistake
percent
whereas
mature people
attended the cinema more in 1996 (approximately 35 percents
). Fix the agreement mistake
percent
In contrast
, in 1992 , both statistics were depicted equally (over 10 percent
)
It is Change the spelling
per cent
also
worth noting that the data for teenagers and people
over 35 witnessed a substantial increase. However
, signficanltly
more teenagers watched the films than elderly Correct your spelling
significantly
people
. The number for
young Change preposition
of
people
reached an all time
high of 60 Add a hyphen
all-time
percents
in 2000 before falling steeply. Meanwhile , the figures for Fix the agreement mistake
percent
people
over 35 saw a steady increase during this
period and finally
in 2003 , nearly 20 percent
of them became to attend cinemas.
Change the spelling
per cent
Overall
, It can be clearly seen that the same number of adulst
and adolescents viewed a movie between 1984 and 2003. Correct your spelling
adults
adult
Nevertheless
, watching movies were
especially relevant among juveniles.Change the verb form
was
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