The following graph shows the number of people (by age) attending cinema more than once a month.

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line graph below represents the percentage of

people

who visited

cinema

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at least once a month from 1984 to 2003.

It is clear that

the figures for adolescents and adults fluctuated dramatically during

this

period.

The

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large proportion

juveniles

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from 7 to 14 mostly joined the cinema in 1998 (nearly 40

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),

whereas

mature

people

attended the cinema more in 1996 (approximately 35

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).

In contrast

, in 1992 , both statistics were depicted equally (over 10

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) It is

also

worth noting that the data for teenagers and

people

over 35 witnessed a substantial increase.

However

,

signficanltly

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significantly

more teenagers watched the films than elderly

people

. The number

for

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young

people

reached an

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high of 60

percents

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in 2000 before falling steeply. Meanwhile , the figures for

people

over 35 saw a steady increase during

this

period and

finally

in 2003 , nearly 20

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of them became to attend cinemas.

Overall

, It can be clearly seen that the same number of

adulst

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adults

adult

and adolescents viewed a movie between 1984 and 2003.

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especially relevant among juveniles.