Are higher taxes or lower taxes better for society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the modern world taxation is an important policy for many countries. It can improve
people
's lives. Which is managed by the government. Use synonyms
For example
, improve public transportation. Linking Words
However
, higher Linking Words
taxes
pay are impact to income of Use synonyms
people
. I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages and that can enhance the services and public facilities for a better life for Use synonyms
people
.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, when Linking Words
people
pay higher Use synonyms
taxes
they contribute to the government budget to improve many services Use synonyms
such
as improve education system and facilities. In some countries, they managed tax budgets to solve their problems. Linking Words
For instance
, Japan enhanced its public health care to solve problems of an Aging society. Linking Words
Moreover
, in the case of the USA, they recruit many soldiers for the army by providing many welfare benefits to their soldiers. Linking Words
Therefore
paying higher Linking Words
taxes
that better for the country.
Use synonyms
In addition
, reducing income inequality for many Linking Words
people
. Because it can share the benefits Use synonyms
from
using Change preposition
of
their
same facilities or services. Providing potential to them for Change the word
the
educate
and get Replace the word
education
a jobs
. Correct the article-noun agreement
a job
jobs
Furthermore
, in Linking Words
case
of economics Correct article usage
the case
that
can improve Correct pronoun usage
it
GDP
of Correct article usage
the GDP
country
by Add an article
the country
encourage
industry for investment. Change the verb form
encouraging
For
Linking Words
example
Add a comma
example,
according to
the information Linking Words
which
I read on the internet, Japan Correct pronoun usage
apply
generate
Wrong verb form
generated
new
industry from hydrogen technology investment. Which is Correct article usage
a new
get
funded by Verb problem
apply
government
tax Correct article usage
a government
2000
million dollars.
Change preposition
of 2000
To conclude
, lower Linking Words
taxes
Use synonyms
better
for Add a missing verb
are better
people
, as Use synonyms
people
can save money in their bank accounts. Use synonyms
However
, they must Linking Words
lost
Change the verb form
lose
be lost
benefit
for the public Fix the agreement mistake
benefits
such
as Linking Words
improve
their Wrong verb form
improving
children
education system.Change noun form
children's
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Task Achievement
Clarify your thesis statement at the beginning to immediately make known your stance on the issue. This will provide a clear roadmap for the rest of the essay.
Task Achievement
Ensure your essay directly addresses the prompt. Discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of higher taxes, making your position clear.
Task Achievement
Make sure your conclusion succinctly summarizes your main arguments and clearly states your position instead of introducing new contrasting ideas.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use paragraphs effectively to organize your arguments. Each paragraph should have a clear main idea supported by explanations, evidence, or examples.
Coherence and Cohesion
Connect your ideas more clearly using linking words and phrases (e.g., Moreover, Therefore, However) to show the relationship between paragraphs and within paragraphs.
Coherence and Cohesion
Avoid grammatical errors and improve sentence structure for clarity. Accurate use of grammar and varied sentence structures can enhance the readability of your essay.