The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the given graph depicts
the
information about the number of outlets which were opened and closed in a specific country over Correct article usage
apply
an
seven years period from 2011 to 2018
after the analysis it is clearly stated that the numerous outlets opening in 2011 were nearly 9,000 Change the article
a
in
the start of the year(2011) after which it Change preposition
at
drop
to 4,000 Change the form of the verb
dropped
then
, these new stores Correct your spelling
began
begin
begain
to rise in 2014 surpassing 6,000 before it showed a gradual drop and remained for three years after Correct your spelling
began
it
Change the pronoun
its
decline
to 3,000 in the Change the verb form
declines
last
year
furthermore
, the number of closures Change preposition
at
in
the Change preposition
at
Correct your spelling
beginning
Correct your spelling
beginning
begaining
of the year was 6,500 after two years it reached Correct your spelling
beginning
Change preposition
apply
to
7,000 before Change preposition
apply
Replace the word
started
start
to Wrong verb form
started
Wrong verb form
decrease
decreased
and hit rock bottom to its lowest point in 2015 Wrong verb form
decrease
however
, it start
to Wrong verb form
started
inclined
to 5,000 and remained steadily throughout the period
Change the verb
incline
overall
, it is vividly manifested that both the lines showed some fluctuation although
closing of new outlets start to increased
Change the form of the verb
increase
while
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