the graph below shows the percentage of population in cities since 1970s with projection to 2030
the line graph depicts information about the ratio of
population
which were registered in four different Add an article
the population
a population
cities
over a seven-year period
between 1970 and 2030
after the analysis, it is clearly stated that in the year of
1970 , Change preposition
apply
USA
remained top in position having populated Correct article usage
the USA
cities
approximately to
70 % Change preposition
apply
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of then
then
the number rose drastically over Correct your spelling
the
decades
for three decades
and remained unchanged throughout the period
reaching above 90% similarly
, korea showed the same pattern. 40% population
were registered at the Correct your spelling
beginning
begining
of the year Correct your spelling
beginning
then
the figure sky rocketed
over Correct your spelling
skyrocketed
decades
hitting 90 % of projection
in 2030
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the projection
furthermore
, from 1970 to 1980, for china
and Capitalize word
China
Change the capitalization
India
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India
india
the number of adding Add a comma
india,
population
remained stable approximately
20% after that, Change preposition
at approximately
population
of Add an article
the population
Change the capitalization
India
india
rose gradually over Change the capitalization
India
a
two Correct article usage
apply
decades
after which the figure remained unchanged throughout the period
but for china
, the ratio hit its peak in 2010 touching 60% after that it remained unchanged over the Capitalize word
China
last
two decades
it is vividly manifested that all four of different
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the different
cities
showed fluctuations however
, the most populous Add the comma(s)
, however
cities
were usa
and Correct your spelling
USA
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Korea
korea
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Korea
while
population
in Add an article
the population
Change the capitalization
India
india
remained lower throughout the Change the capitalization
India
period
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