The pie charts show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015

The pie charts show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015
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The two pie charts illustrate information about the proportion of money which the government spent on various fields in 2010 and 2015. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, education, healthcare and pensions accounted for the highest figures in both years.
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, only welfare and preference for borrowing witnessed an increase during the examined years.
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with, the percentage of expenditure allocated to education
initially
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constituted 24% in 2010 and decreased slightly to 21% in 2015, that of healthcare expenses experienced almost no change (at 20%) from 2010 to 2015. Meanwhile, the figure for pensions remained at the same level, which accounted for 19% in both 2010 and 2015. To continue
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both shares of expenditure which local government allot to the welfare of the population and interest on borrowing represented 8% and 5% in 2010, the figure was significantly higher at 13% and 10% respectively in 2015. The country’s interest in defence power comprised 17% in 2010;
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, it saw a small drop to 14% in 2015.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • allocation
  • budget
  • fiscal
  • increased/decreased spending
  • percentage
  • funding
  • infrastructure
  • public services
  • education
  • healthcare
  • recreation
  • welfare
  • economic conditions
  • fiscal policy
  • trend
  • analysis
  • comparative
  • significant
  • allocate
  • reallocate
  • subsidize
  • cutbacks
  • deficit
  • surplus
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