The graph below shows the proposition of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The line graph below illustrates the distribution of age 65 population data in three countries from 1940 to 2040.
Overall
, the statistics display a major change Linking Words
of
the population number with a Change preposition
in
fluctuated
rise over a 100-year interval.
At the outset of the period, Replace the word
fluctuating
Japan
, Use synonyms
Sweden
and the UK's percentage was below 10%. Use synonyms
Japan
started Use synonyms
as
the lowest position with only 5%, followed by Change preposition
at
Sweden
(6%) and the USA (9%). Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, Linking Words
at the end
of the Linking Words
period
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period,
Japan
took over the place and reached the peak Use synonyms
above all
of the countries with 27%. Despite its significant climb, Linking Words
Japan
remained at the lowest level for over 80 years before they Use synonyms
were dramatically rise
between 2020 and 2040.
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dramatically rose
Sweden
and the USA had encountered Use synonyms
similiar
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similar
condition
with an unsteady elevation throughout the duration. Both countries experienced a prominent increase Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
while
periodically had a slight drop during specific Linking Words
year
. Fix the agreement mistake
years
Although
they both had an increasing number of population, Linking Words
Sweden
ultimately came after the UK and became the second highest rank Use synonyms
between
the three nations.Change preposition
among
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