The graph below shows the proposition of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

The line graph below illustrates the distribution of age 65 population data in three countries from 1940 to 2040.

Overall

, the statistics display a major change

of

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the population number with a

fluctuated

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rise over a 100-year interval. At the outset of the period,

Japan

,

Sweden

and the UK's percentage was below 10%.

Japan

started

as

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the lowest position with only 5%, followed by

Sweden

(6%) and the USA (9%).

Nevertheless

,

at the end

of the

period

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Japan

took over the place and reached the peak

above all

of the countries with 27%. Despite its significant climb,

Japan

remained at the lowest level for over 80 years before they

were dramatically rise

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between 2020 and 2040.

Sweden

and the USA had encountered

similiar

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similar

condition

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with an unsteady elevation throughout the duration. Both countries experienced a prominent increase

while

periodically had a slight drop during specific

year

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years

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.

Although

they both had an increasing number of population,

Sweden

ultimately came after the UK and became the second highest rank

between

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the three nations.