the graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018
The provided line graph depicts the
number
of shop closures and the number
of shop openings in a country from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, both trends experienced a decrease with some fluctuations occurring throughout the year period
.
To begin
with, the total of shops that opened in 2011 stood at around 8.500, marking its peak in the initial period
. After that, the number
plummeted to 4.000 shops in 2012 before it surged to about 6.000 in the subsequent two years. However
, in 2015, the figure of
store openings dropped suddenly, hitting the same Change preposition
for
number
as it was in 2012, and continued to flatten out in the following three years before it dropped to 3.000 in 2018.
Similarly
, the total of outlet closings in 2011 was about 6.400 units
. This
was followed by a slight dip in 2012, hitting 6.000 units
and a rebound to 7.000 in 2013, reaching the highest figure throughout the period
. However
, it showed a downward trend in the subsequent two years, hitting the lowest point in 2015 at approximately 500 units
. The number
, then
, skyrocketed ten-fold to 5.000 units
in 2018 then
levelled off at the end
of the period
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