you ordered a book online for exam preparation. It has been some time since you purchased it and you still have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company about that. 1. Describe your order 2. Explain the importance 3. Say what you want the company to do for you
Dear sir,
I am writing
this
letter to discuss my problem with your e- commerce
company. I ordered a Correct your spelling
e-commerce
book
which was Accounying
Management by Kalyani Publishers on Thursday, Correct your spelling
Accounting
February29
, 2024 which is about $100 with tax and delivery charges. It shows in my online account that it will be delivered on Monday, Correct your spelling
February 29
March4
, 2024 but I did not receive it.
Correct your spelling
March 4
This
book
is important for me because I am persuing
Correct your spelling
pursuing
Correct article usage
a Bacelor
Bacelor
of Commerce and one of my Correct your spelling
Bachelor
friend
Fix the agreement mistake
friends
recommend
Wrong verb form
recommended
me
Correct pronoun usage
I
to
study that Fix the infinitive
apply
publishers
Change noun form
publisher's
book
as they are professionals and wrote their books in simple language. My final exams are coming up next month and I did not have enough time to study. So, I decided to order that book
online. This
book
will help me to secure excellent marks in my examination.
I want you to please double check
my order where it is. Why it's not delivered yet? Who is responsible for that? I need that Add a hyphen
double-check
book
as soon as possible because I did not have much time to study for my final examination. If my order was not send
yet Change the verb form
was not sent
than
please resend it as early as possible. I really appreciate it for taking my problem into consideration.
Thank you in advance.
Your's sincerely,
MohitCorrect your spelling
then
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structure
Make sure to provide a clear introduction to the issue in the opening paragraph to immediately engage the reader.
accuracy
Check dates and factual information for accuracy. February 29, 2024, is not a valid date as 2024 is not a leap year.
coherence
Consider using paragraph breaks to organize your letter more effectively, separating your order description, explanation of importance, and your demands into clear, distinct sections.
style
Enhance your letter with more precise language and variety in sentence structures to better express your concerns and demands.
accuracy
Spell-check and proofread your letter to correct minor spelling errors (e.g., 'Accounying' should be 'Accounting,' 'persuing' should be 'pursuing') for a more professional tone.
tone
Ensure a respectful and formal tone throughout the letter. Phrases like 'I really appreciate it for taking my problem into consideration' could be more formally expressed as 'I would greatly appreciate your prompt attention to this matter.'
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite