The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.
The bar chart below illustrates the global
pineapple
exports by three major countries that produce
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produced
pineapple
in 2009 and 2019, while
the pie chart displays the cost breakdown to the consumer each
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of each
pineapple
in the latter year.
From the overall
perspective, Country
B dominated among other countries and showed the best results in 2009. However
, Country
A produced a lot more in 2019 whereas
Country
C's production of target fruit was less in both years.
Furthermore
, on the pie chart
we can see that distribution and retail's percentage was the highest by showing 35%.
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chart,
Country
A's export
had a big dissemblance within ten years as it was only 1% in 2009 but it increased sharply in 2019 with over 10%.
As I have mentioned above, Fix the agreement mistake
exports
Country
C's export
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exports
was
the least in both years with a Correct subject-verb agreement
were
little
difference of 1 percent.
As for the breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each Correct word choice
small
pineapple
, the least showed in producers with the
5%.Correct article usage
apply
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