The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.
The bar chart below illustrates the global
pineapple
exports by three major countries that
produce
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pineapple
in 2009 and 2019,
while
the pie chart displays the cost breakdown to the consumer
each
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of each
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pineapple
in the latter year. From the
overall
perspective,
Country
B dominated among other countries and showed the best results in 2009.
However
,
Country
A produced a lot more in 2019
whereas
Country
C's production of target fruit was less in both years.
Furthermore
, on the pie
chart
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we can see that distribution and retail's percentage was the highest by showing 35%.
Country
A's
export
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had a big dissemblance within ten years as it was only 1% in 2009 but it increased sharply in 2019 with over 10%. As I have mentioned above,
Country
C's
export
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exports
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was
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the least in both years with a
little
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small
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difference of 1 percent. As for the breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each
pineapple
, the least showed in producers with
the
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5%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pineapple, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.

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  • exports
  • dominant
  • emerging trends
  • production costs
  • transportation
  • retailer markup
  • global trade dynamics
  • sustainability
  • market demand
  • economic factors
  • export volumes
  • logistic costs
  • retail price
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