Two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

Two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010
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, two maps have been provided illustrating road accessibility to a city hospital between 2007 and 2010. In the year 2010, they transformed the bus station of 2007 on the
left hand
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side of the hospital
to
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a roundabout.
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in 2007, the staff used to share their parking spaces with the public but as the
hears
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progressed, the management changed
gave
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them their own parking space and the general population couldn't use the same spot. With the general progress of the hospital, they have added a bus station on the
right wing
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side of the facility. The map shows us that a big implementation project was carried
between
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out between
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the year
of
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apply
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2007 to 2010.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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