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Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village.

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village.
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The given map illustrates the developments of Chorleywood village, which were made over
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 of 125 years. Admittedly, the changes in
this
 rural area got much quicker in 1970-1994, compared to previous years.
To begin
 with, the modifications were pretty limited in the first place. The adjustments were only made near
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a train station, in fact, it was the main road, which was constructed in the village.
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, the railway was built in 1909 and connected to
main
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 road in the east of
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Chorleywood.
Moreover
, in the left lower corner, can be seen developments, that have been made from 1922 to 1970. The revision was focused on
this
 part of place, until 1970. Later, the repair work moved to the east and there were made the hugest alterations.
This
 sector was undeveloped for over
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 century. The Motorway took
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 big part in
this
 area and was built in 1970.
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  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Steadily
  • Pivotal events
  • Significant change
  • Transportation links
  • Commuter village
  • Residential areas
  • Commercial areas
  • Public facilities
  • Infrastructure
  • Environmental impact
  • Community life
  • Conservation efforts
  • Maintaining character
  • Vicinity
  • Unique aspects
  • Common challenges
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