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The table gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates growth rates of the public have been differentiated by categories in
Australia
 and
Malaysia
 since 1980 and 2002.
Overall
, the highest majority of the
population
 was 24.3 million in
Malaysia
 in 2002, and the minor total
population
 was 14.7 million in
Australia
 in 1980.
However
, the male
population
 rate of 49% was the same in both years in
Australia
as well as
Malaysia
 occupied the same date of the male
population
 around fifty per cent.
On the other hand
, the female growth ratio was similar at 50.1% in
Australia
 in both years.
Also
, around forty-nine per cent female production ratio was similar in both years in
Malaysia
.
Hence
, the total growth rate of 19.6 million in
Australia
 by 2002 as compared to
Malaysia
 decreased their wealth of people by around 13.7 sum up.
Furthermore
, 1.5% birth ratio till 1980, and that decreased to 1.3% in 2002
along with
Malaysia
's occupied childbirth of 3.2% in 1980, and it was decreased in 2002 by 2.2%. During
this
 period, the average annual people wealth was about 0.1% in
Australia
 and 0.3% in
Malaysia
.
In addition
, older people were 9.6% of
Australia
 in 1980, it increased by about 3% in 2002.
Finally
, older persons were 3.7% of
Malaysia
then
 increased by 4.3% in 2002.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, malaysia, population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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