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The table gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates growth rates of the public have been differentiated by categories in
Australia
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 and
Malaysia
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 since 1980 and 2002.
Overall
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, the highest majority of the
population
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 was 24.3 million in
Malaysia
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 in 2002, and the minor total
population
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 was 14.7 million in
Australia
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 in 1980.
However
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, the male
population
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 rate of 49% was the same in both years in
Australia
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as well as
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Malaysia
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 occupied the same date of the male
population
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 around fifty per cent.
On the other hand
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, the female growth ratio was similar at 50.1% in
Australia
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 in both years.
Also
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, around forty-nine per cent female production ratio was similar in both years in
Malaysia
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.
Hence
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, the total growth rate of 19.6 million in
Australia
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 by 2002 as compared to
Malaysia
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 decreased their wealth of people by around 13.7 sum up.
Furthermore
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, 1.5% birth ratio till 1980, and that decreased to 1.3% in 2002
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Malaysia
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's occupied childbirth of 3.2% in 1980, and it was decreased in 2002 by 2.2%. During
this
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 period, the average annual people wealth was about 0.1% in
Australia
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 and 0.3% in
Malaysia
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.
In addition
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, older people were 9.6% of
Australia
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 in 1980, it increased by about 3% in 2002.
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, older persons were 3.7% of
Malaysia
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then
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 increased by 4.3% in 2002.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, malaysia, population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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