The table gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates growth rates of the public have been differentiated by categories in
Australia
and Malaysia
since 1980 and 2002.
Overall
, the highest majority of the population
was 24.3 million in Malaysia
in 2002, and the minor total population
was 14.7 million in Australia
in 1980.
However
, the male population
rate of 49% was the same in both years in Australia
as well as
Malaysia
occupied the same date of the male population
around fifty per cent. On the other hand
, the female growth ratio was similar at 50.1% in Australia
in both years. Also
, around forty-nine per cent female production ratio was similar in both years in Malaysia
. Hence
, the total growth rate of 19.6 million in Australia
by 2002 as compared to Malaysia
decreased their wealth of people by around 13.7 sum up.
Furthermore
, 1.5% birth ratio till 1980, and that decreased to 1.3% in 2002 along with
Malaysia
's occupied childbirth of 3.2% in 1980, and it was decreased in 2002 by 2.2%. During this
period, the average annual people wealth was about 0.1% in Australia
and 0.3% in Malaysia
. In addition
, older people were 9.6% of Australia
in 1980, it increased by about 3% in 2002. Finally
, older persons were 3.7% of Malaysia
then
increased by 4.3% in 2002.Submitted by psingh8059 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, malaysia, population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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