The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the
plan’s
conditions of Central Change noun form
plan
Library
Use synonyms
right
now and 20 years ago. Use synonyms
Overall
, there are many differences Linking Words
places
of Change preposition
in places
Use synonyms
library
between 20 years ago and now, Fix the agreement mistake
libraries
such
as Linking Words
book
placement, lecturer Use synonyms
room
, cafe, information desk and reading Use synonyms
room
.
In the past, there Use synonyms
were
Change the verb form
was
enquiry
desk Correct article usage
an enquiry
in
Change preposition
on
Use synonyms
right
side and Add an article
the right
reading
Correct article usage
a reading
room
Use synonyms
in
the left side Change preposition
on
in
Change preposition
at
gate
entrance of Correct article usage
the gate
Use synonyms
library
. Afterwards, there were Add an article
the library
place
of Fix the agreement mistake
places
book
differentiated based on fiction and non-fiction in the middle of the Use synonyms
library
Use synonyms
room
with Use synonyms
table
and chairs between both of them. There are two rooms in the corner, Fix the agreement mistake
tables
such
as children’s Linking Words
Use synonyms
book
and computer games.
After 20 years, there are a Fix the agreement mistake
books
lot
changes Add the preposition
lot of
from
the Central Change preposition
in
Library
rooms. the enquiry desk was removed to become a cafe shop now. Afterwards, the computer Use synonyms
room
Use synonyms
replaced
by Add a missing verb
was replaced
children’s
Correct article usage
the children’s
book
and Use synonyms
move
to in front of the Wrong verb form
moved
room
which was previously the reading Use synonyms
room
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the chairs and table Linking Words
was
replaced and Correct subject-verb agreement
were
built
the self-service machine Verb problem
apply
in
the Change preposition
on
right
side close to Use synonyms
adult
fiction Correct article usage
the adult
Use synonyms
book’s
place. Change noun form
book
In addition
, there is Linking Words
lecture
Correct article usage
a lecture
room
Use synonyms
right
now.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, right, book, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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