The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the
plan’s
conditions of Central Change noun form
plan
Library
right
now and 20 years ago. Overall
, there are many differences places
of Change preposition
in places
library
between 20 years ago and now, Fix the agreement mistake
libraries
such
as book
placement, lecturer room
, cafe, information desk and reading room
.
In the past, there were
Change the verb form
was
enquiry
desk Correct article usage
an enquiry
in
Change preposition
on
right
side and Add an article
the right
reading
Correct article usage
a reading
room
in
the left side Change preposition
on
in
Change preposition
at
gate
entrance of Correct article usage
the gate
library
. Afterwards, there were Add an article
the library
place
of Fix the agreement mistake
places
book
differentiated based on fiction and non-fiction in the middle of the library
room
with table
and chairs between both of them. There are two rooms in the corner, Fix the agreement mistake
tables
such
as children’s book
and computer games.
After 20 years, there are a Fix the agreement mistake
books
lot
changes Add the preposition
lot of
from
the Central Change preposition
in
Library
rooms. the enquiry desk was removed to become a cafe shop now. Afterwards, the computer room
replaced
by Add a missing verb
was replaced
children’s
Correct article usage
the children’s
book
and move
to in front of the Wrong verb form
moved
room
which was previously the reading room
. Moreover
, the chairs and table was
replaced and Correct subject-verb agreement
were
built
the self-service machine Verb problem
apply
in
the Change preposition
on
right
side close to adult
fiction Correct article usage
the adult
book’s
place. Change noun form
book
In addition
, there is lecture
Correct article usage
a lecture
room
right
now.Submitted by writingieltsband9 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, right, book, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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