What are the advantages and disadvantages for children of watching televizion?

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that watching

televizion

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television

can provide

children

with entertainment.

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this

if

they

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addicted to watching

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,they

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spend less time on physical skills and should artificial light from the

television

negatively

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their sleep, I believe the benefits - some shows will help kids how

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think creatively and

television

is educational.

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looking at

bad

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sides of watching

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. The main

promlem

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problem

with

television

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time away from more productive activities. What I mean by that

they

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don't do morning

exersices

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exercises

or

have

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not any spare time

for

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go outside and make friends. It may lead to

children

be

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unsociable and

feel

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loneliness

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. Another issue

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artificial light from

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television

should negatively

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for

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their health. Just like phones and computers

also

televisions'

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television's

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blue light

have

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an influence

for

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kids

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eye

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. When they watch

television

closely, it will damage

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the

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eyesight.

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,

children

will need to

to

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wear eyeglasses. Turn to the

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side of

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, watching

television

will help kids how to think positively.

For example

, they see figures,

colors

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and different situations.

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to

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they

learn

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distinguish colors. A real benefit of watching

television

is well-bred. That means shows or cartoons' characters teach to the

children

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and cons. All things considered, you need to weigh up

advantages

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of

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,

helpful

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sides of watching

television

and

disadvantages

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the disadvantages

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of

bad

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affects

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effects

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.

Personally

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I believe the benefits in terms of watching

television

eventually outweigh any negatives.