The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.
The chart gives information about how people in Canada are using a number of social networking
sites
in two time periods.
Firstly
there are people who are not using social networking sites
at all, for example
in 2014 the percentage was 22 and respectively 21 per cent
in 2015.
On the other hand
, in 2014, 36 per cent
of people were using only one
site and 28 per cent
in 2015 with a difference of 12 per cent
between them.
Meanwhile, when is about to use two sites
, the difference is only one
per cent
. It can be clearly observed that there is a downward trend when one
is about to use more than one
or two sites
. Only 12 per cent
were using three sites
in 2014 and 16 per cent
in 2015, a tiny fraction is the difference between them.
The least used sites
are four and five with 5 and 2 per cent
in 2014 and respectively 8 and 4 per cent
in 2015.Submitted by atomoiaga46 on
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