The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.
The chart gives information about how people in Canada are using a number of social networking
sites
in two time periods.
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there are people who are not using social networking Linking Words
sites
at all, Use synonyms
for example
in 2014 the percentage was 22 and respectively 21 per Linking Words
cent
in 2015.
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On the other hand
, in 2014, 36 per Linking Words
cent
of people were using only Use synonyms
one
site and 28 per Use synonyms
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in 2015 with a difference of 12 per Use synonyms
cent
between them.
Meanwhile, when is about to use two Use synonyms
sites
, the difference is only Use synonyms
one
per Use synonyms
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. It can be clearly observed that there is a downward trend when Use synonyms
one
is about to use more than Use synonyms
one
or two Use synonyms
sites
. Only 12 per Use synonyms
cent
were using three Use synonyms
sites
in 2014 and 16 per Use synonyms
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in 2015, a tiny fraction is the difference between them.
The least used Use synonyms
sites
are four and five with 5 and 2 per Use synonyms
cent
in 2014 and respectively 8 and 4 per Use synonyms
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in 2015.Use synonyms
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