The bar charts below shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second year of use
The bar chart illustrates how many
people
accessed the Use synonyms
Internet
continuously over 24 months.
Use synonyms
Overall
, there was an upward trend in the first Linking Words
year
Use synonyms
while
the opposite was true for the second Linking Words
year
. Use synonyms
In addition
, Linking Words
October
and February were the most popular visiting the Use synonyms
Internet
in the first Use synonyms
year
, Use synonyms
while
April registered the lowest figure in the second Linking Words
year
.
Regarding the first Use synonyms
year
, the Use synonyms
number
of users accessing the Use synonyms
Internet
in July stood at 25000, after which it experienced a dramatic rise to reach a peak of 40000 in Use synonyms
October
, before ending the period of 30000 in December. At the same time, the Use synonyms
number
of users accessing the Use synonyms
Internet
increased significantly from 35000 in January to reach a peak of over 40000 in February, with a considerable drop to 15000 in April, and a final rise to 3900 in June.
In terms of the second Use synonyms
year
, 20000 Use synonyms
people
visited the Use synonyms
Internet
in July, with a significant decrease to 10000 in September. After that, there was a slight increase in the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
people
visiting the Use synonyms
Internet
about 20000 in Use synonyms
October
, and the figures for Use synonyms
people
who visited the community website varied consistently between Use synonyms
October
and February just around 20000. The Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
people
who visited the Use synonyms
Internet
witnessed a dramatic decrease of just under 10000, reaching a growth of 10000 from May to June.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, internet, year, october, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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