The bar charts below shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second year of use
The bar chart illustrates how many
people
accessed the Internet
continuously over 24 months.
Overall
, there was an upward trend in the first year
while
the opposite was true for the second year
. In addition
, October
and February were the most popular visiting the Internet
in the first year
, while
April registered the lowest figure in the second year
.
Regarding the first year
, the number
of users accessing the Internet
in July stood at 25000, after which it experienced a dramatic rise to reach a peak of 40000 in October
, before ending the period of 30000 in December. At the same time, the number
of users accessing the Internet
increased significantly from 35000 in January to reach a peak of over 40000 in February, with a considerable drop to 15000 in April, and a final rise to 3900 in June.
In terms of the second year
, 20000 people
visited the Internet
in July, with a significant decrease to 10000 in September. After that, there was a slight increase in the number
of people
visiting the Internet
about 20000 in October
, and the figures for people
who visited the community website varied consistently between October
and February just around 20000. The number
of people
who visited the Internet
witnessed a dramatic decrease of just under 10000, reaching a growth of 10000 from May to June.Submitted by nguyenhuyhoa1506 on
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