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The bar charts below shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second year of use

The bar charts below shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second year of use
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The bar chart illustrates how many
people
 accessed the
Internet
 continuously over 24 months.
Overall
, there was an upward trend in the first
year
while
 the opposite was true for the second
year
.
In addition
,
October
 and February were the most popular visiting the
Internet
 in the first
year
,
while
 April registered the lowest figure in the second
year
. Regarding the first
year
, the
number
 of users accessing the
Internet
 in July stood at 25000, after which it experienced a dramatic rise to reach a peak of 40000 in
October
, before ending the period of 30000 in December. At the same time, the
number
 of users accessing the
Internet
 increased significantly from 35000 in January to reach a peak of over 40000 in February, with a considerable drop to 15000 in April, and a final rise to 3900 in June. In terms of the second
year
, 20000
people
 visited the
Internet
 in July, with a significant decrease to 10000 in September. After that, there was a slight increase in the
number
 of
people
 visiting the
Internet
 about 20000 in
October
, and the figures for
people
 who visited the community website varied consistently between
October
 and February just around 20000. The
number
 of
people
 who visited the
Internet
 witnessed a dramatic decrease of just under 10000, reaching a growth of 10000 from May to June.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, internet, year, october, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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