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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the treatment of
waste
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products
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 in three different
countries
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, namely, the Republic of
Korea
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, Sweden and the United Kingdom.It is clear from the graph that ,
waste
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products
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 are managed in five different ways, with recycling and burying underground being the most preferred method in some of the
countries
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.
According to
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 what is shown, In
Korea
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, 69% of
waste
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products
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 are recycled,
in contrast
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, the
UK
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 does not
waste
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products
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 but Sweden recycles more than one-third of
Korea
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's
rate
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. All
countries
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 bury some of their
waste
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products
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 underground, with the
UK
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 recording the highest
rate
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 at a wildly 82% against Sweden's
rate
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 of 55%.
Korea
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 recorded a figure of 9% which is almost one-ninth of the
UK
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's
rate
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.
To sum up
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, we could say that, the
UK
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 treats some of its garbage by using chemical treatment or dumping at sea, a practice
that is
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 not applied to the treatment of refuse in the two other
countries
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.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, products, countries, korea, uk, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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