The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The given figures represent the sales and share prices of Coca-Cola. The volume of sales divided by region was presented in a pie
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.It is clear from the graph that , the share prices between 1996 and 2001 were displayed in a line
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According to
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what is shown, in the pie
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, it can be seen that North America was the largest section, which is 30.4% ,
whereas
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Africa and the Middle East are the smallest part, which is 7%. The line
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starts the period at the bottom of the graph,which
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above 30, it was increased to nearly 50% and dropped in the middle of the year 1997 and reached the peak of the graph in 1988 and it fluctuated and ended the timeframe at above 50.
To sum up
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, we could say that, the information experienced fluctuate trend throughout the whole timeframe.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words chart with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuations
  • market share
  • geographic distribution
  • revenue
  • financial performance
  • quarterly reports
  • shareholder
  • economic indicators
  • consumer behavior
  • aggregate data
  • profit margins
  • fiscal period
  • trend analysis
  • variance
  • growth rate
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