The graph below shows the amount of bananas exported from 4 different South American countries from 1976 to 2016.

The graph below shows the amount of bananas exported from 4 different South American countries from 1976 to 2016.
The given line graph illustrates the exported bananas from 4 different South American countries between 1976 and 2016.
Overall
, it can be seen that the number of
banana
exports
in Chile
as well as
Argentina
are
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increased over the period,
whereas
there was a decrease in
Brazil
and Colombia. It should
also
be noted how
banana
exports
in Colombia declined over the entire period, it remained as the most of exporting country. With regards to the two countries which had an increase, Chile and Argentina were between 500kg and 4000kg in 1976, respectively. Regarding Chile’s
banana
exports
were the least in 1976,
it
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gradually rose to over 500kg and grew quickly to over 4000kg by 2006
then
reached a plateau until the end of the period. In the meantime,
exports
of bananas in Argentina rose steadily over 20 years from 1976 to 1996, they exceeded
Brazil
in 1996, reaching nearly by 2006 and
it
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levelled off by 2016. Looking at the exported bananas in Colombia and
Brazil
which was
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. Until 1986. Colombia’s
banana
exports
remained steady
then
it
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dropped to 9000kg in 2016.
Although
, it was the most exportation of
banana
country.
Likewise
,
Brazil
has increased sharply from 8500kg in 1976 to more than 10000, reaching a peak of 10500kg.
However
, it declined dramatically to less than 4000kg making it the least
banana
-exported country.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words banana, exports, brazil, kg with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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