The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014.
The line graph illustrates the figure of revenues in the three most common products in a particular bakery in 2014.
It can be seen that the amount of sales product in Bread reached in the final month after remaining stable,
while
the revenue of Buns product decreased slightly, as opposed to the increase of Pies.
To begin
with, the information about sales of Bread was a significant decrease from $80 thousand
to over $40 thousand
in March before fluctuating dramatically from March to September,
and reached the highest point of $80 Remove the comma
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thousand
in the period of the month. While
the figures for Pies rose moderately from $10 thousand
to approximately $20 thousand
in October before growing considerably to $40 thousand
in December.
In contrast
, the revenues of sales in Buns stood at $40 thousand
in January and rose moderately to respectively $70 thousand
. The figure of Buns witnessed a plateau with $70 thousand
between May and August before declining significantly to only $30 thousand
in December.Submitted by dongocuyennhi1102001 on
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