The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration below displays the process of how to recycle
plastic
bottles
.
Overall
, there are 9 states in the diagram, consisting of collecting, shipping, decomposition, and refabrication.
The first stage is to collect discarded plastic
bottles
from household litter boxes, which are concentrated into recycled trunks and transported to the recycling centre. Once these bottles
arrive, they are classified into recyclable and non-recyclable. At this
point, the recyclable bottles
undergo the re-shaped process, compressing into blocks, and later into crushed debris.
In the following step, these small pieces of plastic
are placed in the machine where they are produced into plastic
pellets. Afterwards, pellets are heated to compose raw materials, which can be reused to manufacture either plastic
containers or recycling products such
as clothes, bags and pencils, and the end of the recycling cycle begins again.Submitted by Chloe on
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