The diagram indicates the life process of the honey bee
The diagram
illustrate
the life cycle of Change the verb form
illustrates
honey
bee
from Fix the agreement mistake
bees
eggs
to young adults in six processes.
Overall
, it is clear that
honey
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a honey
bee
's life ususally
takes thirty-four to thirty-six Correct your spelling
usually
days
to becames
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become
young
adult, with Correct article usage
a young
exception
Add an article
an exception
the exception
for
female Change preposition
of
bee
which Fix the agreement mistake
bees
needed
Wrong verb form
need
extra
four Correct article usage
an extra
days
to mature.
In detalis
, The Correct your spelling
detail
females
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female
honey
bee
lay
one to two Wrong verb form
lays
eggs
every three day
, the first stage of Change to a plural noun
days
bee
life started
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starts
as
Change preposition
with
eggs
,and it takes nine to ten days
to hatched
,Change the form of the verb
hatch
then
after that the baby bee
move
out Change the verb form
moves
off
the Replace the word
of
eggs
, and growday
by day till grow bigger in size. In the Correct your spelling
grows
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process
processes
the preadult Add a comma
processes,
bee
started to shed there body parts like old feathers,hair and skin to leave space for new part
to grow. Fix the agreement mistake
parts
it is
Verb problem
It
happen
three times as Wrong verb form
happens
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the bee
bee
keep growing to young Fix the agreement mistake
bees
adult
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adults
in
the 9th Change preposition
on
days
. in the final stage Fix the agreement mistake
day
honey
bee
became
fully matured, but for Wrong verb form
becomes
female
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a female
bee
extra four days
is
needed to reach maturity.Correct subject-verb agreement
are
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