Some people prefer to travel in their own country when they have some time off. Others think that it is better to take a trip to a foreign country. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your choice.
In
this
modern era, it is important to have a work-life balance. Many people are fond of travelling and they prefer to Linking Words
travel
in their own Use synonyms
country
. On the other side, there are many people who prefer to take a foreign trip. I prefer to Use synonyms
travel
in my own Use synonyms
country
and Use synonyms
this
essay will provide relevant examples and a lucid conclusion to support my choice
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Firstly
, it is very important to manage the Linking Words
time
off and plan something Use synonyms
in
that given Change preposition
within
time
limit. Use synonyms
Traveling
in my own Change the spelling
Travelling
country
is less Use synonyms
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time consuming
and I can Add a hyphen
time-consuming
travel
to more places under a specific Use synonyms
time
limit. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, it is cheaper to Linking Words
travel
in Use synonyms
own
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your own
country
as there are many alternate ways to reach the destination as compared to a foreign trip. Use synonyms
For example
, If I have 1 week of Linking Words
time
to Use synonyms
travel
, it will take me 2 Use synonyms
days
to reach a foreign destination, 2 Use synonyms
days
to Use synonyms
travel
there and 2 Use synonyms
days
to come back via flight. On the other side, If I Use synonyms
travel
locally Use synonyms
then
I can Linking Words
travel
all the given 7 Use synonyms
days
in a budget-friendly way.
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Furthermore
, travelling to a foreign Linking Words
country
takes Use synonyms
lot
of effort, Change the article
a lot
time
and planning. If I want to plan a foreign trip, I'll have to check the Use synonyms
weather
of the destination, shop Use synonyms
accordingly
, Linking Words
book
the tickets in advance and there is always a chance of flight cancellation. Correct word choice
and book
For example
, If have planned my 15 Linking Words
days
of Use synonyms
travel
to a foreign Use synonyms
country
and after reaching there, what if the Use synonyms
weather
doesn't suit me? or what if the Use synonyms
weather
changes my plans? It's much better to Use synonyms
travel
in our own Use synonyms
country
to avoid these unplanned situations.
In conclusion, I believe there are multiple advantages of enjoying Use synonyms
a
Correct article usage
apply
time
off by travelling in our own Use synonyms
country
because it is cheaper, timely managed, easy to manage and full of thrill. Use synonyms
Also
, I don't have to worry about adapting to Linking Words
Use synonyms
weather
for my local Correct article usage
the weather
travel
.Use synonyms
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Structure
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Content
You provided specific examples to support your points, which is excellent. To enhance, incorporate a wider range of examples, possibly considering different age groups or interests to make your argument more comprehensive.
Language
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Critical Analysis
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