The bar chart shows the numbers of cars per 1000 people in 5 European countries in three years and compaire with European everages.
The bar charts compare the proportions of domestic and international
students
across different gender groups studying computer science from 2010 to 2012. Overall
, there is a steady upward trend observed in both British
and international students
. However
, there is
a slight negative trend among Wrong verb form
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British
male students
in 2011.
Upon closer examination, the proportion of female students
in both British
and international cohorts started at approximately 32% and 13%, respectively, in 2010. By the following year, these proportions had increased to roughly 44% and 18% each, with a slight further
increase observed in 2012.
According to
the charts, male domestic students
experienced a moderate drop to nearly 24% and 23% in 2011, narrowing the gap between British
and international students
. However
, in subsequent years, both cohorts of male students
showed a significant increase, reaching around 43% and 39%, respectively."Submitted by dlwltn6615 on
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