The two pie charts compare the different sources on which children charity in the USA had spend and received money in the year 2016.
A glance at the two pie charts provided the distributions of revenue
sources
and costs of children’s charities in the United States
in 2016.
Overall
, the vast majority of the donated sources
were food , whilst the least proportion of them were investment income and government grants. Moreover
, the expenditures of the children’s charities in the USA were mostly program
services. According to
the information shown in the pie charts, 95.8% of expenditures were used in program
services and only 1.6% of them were spent on management and general.Besides
, fundraising only used 2.6% of the expenditures.When it comes to revenue sources
, 86.6% of them were food and 10.4% of them were community contributions.What should be particularly mentioned is that 0.4% of the sources
were other income which was two times as much as investment income and government grants which were both 0.2%.Although
they spent most of their money on program
services, the sources
of program
revenue were only 2.2%.Submitted by s99104032 on
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