The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process
of
Change preposition
by
instant
noodles are produced. Correct pronoun usage
which instant
Overall
, analyzing the given data, it can be seen that there are eight stages to manufacture instant
noodle
transform from ingredients until the noodle
is packed into cups.
To begin
with, the flour that is
delivered by truck moves to large facilities to keep materials in storage silos before being mixed with water and oil into a mixer. After that, the result of the mixer is rolled into dough sheets before proceeding to be sliced into strips. Afterwards, these dough strips are shaped into noodle
discs. Moreover
, cooking the oil and fried the noodle
discs with it.
Subsequently
, there are two last
stages before packing the instant
noodle
. After drying the noodle
disc, put it into the cup and also
add vegetables and spices into a cup. The last
step is giving the labels to the cup and sealing the instant
noodle
packaging.Submitted by writingieltsband9 on
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