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Your english-speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project she is doing about celebrating New Year in different countries. Write a letted to your friend.In your letter: Say how important New Year is to people in your country Describe how New Year is celebrated in your country Explain what you like about New Year celebrations in your country

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Dear Selena, I hope
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 letter finds you in good health and spirit.How you and your family have been doing?I have just got your letter and wanted to inform you that I can give you
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 appropriate information about how New
year
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Year
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 is celebrated in my country. New
year
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 is celebrated almost in every religion and every country.
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,in
Uzbekistan
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 most
people
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 tend to celebrate
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holidag
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holiday
 around family and friends.
New
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 year is important to
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people
 as it means a new start
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 life and making changes.
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 holiday will mostly be celebrated around
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 whom we love and respect.Most
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the
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people
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 tend to make various
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 of meals and salads. In my
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country,
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people
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 like the joy that they get from being around
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people
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we
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 love,
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,some
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 like it because of giving and getting presents.Regardless,what I love the most is food. I hope
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 be helpful.If you need
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 details I would be pleased to help and feel free to ask me. Yours sincerely, Jasmina

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Greeting and Closing
Ensure greeting and closing are appropriate and consistent with the task.
Logical Structure
Aim to have a logical structure, organizing your letter into clear paragraphs each dealing with a different aspect of the topic.
Completeness of Response
Extend your ideas further for task achievement. For example, describe specific traditions or personal anecdotes related to New Year celebrations in your country.
Single Idea per Paragraph
Use paragraphing effectively to separate your ideas clearly.
Writing Tone
Maintain a suitable and consistent tone throughout your letter. It’s good to match the informal tone appropriate for writing to a friend.
Writing Tone
Your letter has a friendly and appropriate tone for the task, maintaining a conversational style typical for correspondence between friends.
Completeness of Response
You successfully covered all parts of the prompt: the importance of New Year, how it's celebrated, and what you personally enjoy about it.
Greeting and Closing
Your letter opens and closes in a friendly and respectful manner, which is suitable for the context of writing to a friend.
Logical Structure
You adequately organized your letter with clear divisions between paragraphs, each serving a specific purpose in discussing New Year celebrations.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant
  • reflection
  • goals
  • loved ones
  • fireworks
  • gatherings
  • traditions
  • public events
  • religious ceremonies
  • festive atmosphere
  • reconnect
  • exchanging gifts
  • resolutions
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