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In today's digital age, anyone with a smartphone can capture and share photographs. This accessibility to photography diminishes the value of professional photographers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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With the wide use of smartphones, every
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people
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 is able to take photographs in their daily lives. There is a concern that many professional
photographers
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 would lose their value because it is not a unique skill anymore. Personally, I disagree with
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 point. It is true that
photography
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 has become
a
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easy
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 accessible skill and hobby. With a smartphone, it seems like everyone has a camera and they can capture
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memeorable
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memorable
 occasions anytime and anywhere.
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Whereas
 in the past,
people
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 have no choice but to find a photographer to take group
photos
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, family
photos
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 and wedding
photos
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.
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, in terms of the professional zone,
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 taken by animates cannot be compared with those from professional
photographers
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. The primary reason is that pressing the camera button on the smartphone feels
like
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pretty easy, but
the
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real
photography
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 involves a great variety of skills.
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, most general public
don't
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 have
awareness
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 of the role of light in
photography
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.
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, most of their
photos
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 are even taken
aganst
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against
 light, making the details unclear.
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, these things are the basic foundation of
photography
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 and only the
photos
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 with good effect will be treasured as precious memories.
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, there is a rising trend
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people
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's passion for
photography
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. As more and more normal
people
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 develop a habit of taking and sharing
photos
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 when they travel, visit attractions and go to
museum
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, posting these images on social media is a great way to show themselves.
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 taking delicate
photos
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 like influencers could be a great challenge for us,
people
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 turn to seeking
for
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professional
service
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. A typical example is that there are so many traveling posts finding local
photographers
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 on social media,
such
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little red book
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 and
instagram
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. The need for
photography
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 experiences a dramatic increase and even if some new
photographers
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 receive lots of orders
by
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this
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 way. In conclusion,
although
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photography
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 is more accessible to
people
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 now than before, the value of professional
photographers
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 does not diminish. The reason is that a growing number of
people
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 to realize the importance of
photography
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 technology and have a liking for recruiting
photographers
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 to capture their life moments.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • digital age
  • smartphone
  • capture
  • share
  • accessibility
  • professional photographers
  • diminishes
  • value
  • high-quality photos
  • social media platforms
  • demand
  • editing tools
  • filters
  • mobile apps
  • expertise
  • creativity
  • technical skills
  • high-quality results
  • commercial use
  • personal use
  • professional services
  • events
  • weddings
  • corporate shoots
  • advertising campaigns
  • professional equipment
  • lighting
  • composition
  • post-processing
  • superior photos
  • specialized fields
  • wildlife
  • sports
  • fashion photography
  • market saturation
  • stand out
  • create and share images
  • art form
  • convey messages
  • emotions
  • stories
  • casual smartphone users
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