The graph and chart below give information about species extinctions and the threats to plant life.

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extinctions and the threats to plant life from 2000 to 2100 in the tropical forests.

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there will be an increased pattern in the extinction of plant and animal species by 2060 and the line will witness a significant decrease from 2060 to 2100

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threats to plant life

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namely, human impact and natural events. Regarding

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graph,

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extinction

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of flora and fauna

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increased gradually from around 2000 to 10.000 between 2000 and 2020, in the following decades the number of

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extinctions

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reached 30,000

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the same increasing level. In the next years from 2050 to

2060

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the line graph saw a sharp increase from 30.000 to approximately 49.000,

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trend

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will experience a gradual decrease without any fluctuation from around 50.000 to 28.000 between 2060 and 2100. In terms of

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factors, it is easily seen that

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effect

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on environment more than natural events (disasters, other events) with almost 60%. Human

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include different aspects mainly harvesting (14.4%), development (10.4),logging(9.7%) and livestock, disturbance ,

plantations

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and plantations

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