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The table below shows the projected costings over the next five years in American dollars for three environmental projects sustainable forestry. The pie chart shows the expected expenditure breakdown allocation for the first years as the projects are set up.

The table below shows the projected costings over the next five years in American dollars for three environmental projects sustainable forestry. The pie chart shows the expected expenditure breakdown allocation for the first years as the projects are set up.
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The breakdown shows the projected
costing
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costs
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over
next
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the next
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 five years in America, for three environmental projects with
a
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apply
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pie charts indicating expenditure
a
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and a
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 table allocation for the first
year
a the
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the
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 program
are
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 set up.
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three
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the three
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place
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several a change
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in
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a
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the
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amount of expenses. As we can see
by
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in
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 5 years
the
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South-east
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Southeast
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 Asia will have reached 50
million
 dollars,
while
 Central America will have spent only
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5
million
. having the least expenses among the rest. As can be seen
fron
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from
 the table, in the first
year
 Central America will
spent
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spend
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 twenty
millon
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million
 money,but by
last
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the last
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 3 years will have a stable write-off of money, about 5
million
.
However
, a
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Southeast
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 Africa It will only increase to 50
million
 despite
for
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the 2nd
year
where
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when
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 a drop of ten
million
 is expected,
then
 the sum will increase again.
By contrast
 the profiles of three environmental projects for sustainable foresty include rough changes from
first
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year
 to our
days
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. It's clear from
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the
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 pie chart that salaries
is
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 rated a a big project expenditure in
year
 1 among
of
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all
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the
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others experience. With a massive equal 50 per cent
from
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of
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 the group
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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