The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbian island between 2010 and 2017.
this
line graph depicts the number of tourist
in millions visiting a specific Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
caribbean
island in the years between 2010 and 2017.
It is clear from the graph that the number of Change the capitalization
Caribbean
visitors
in
increased, beginning from 1 at least and going up to 1.5 and more in the period of 7 years.
Change preposition
apply
According to
what is shown in spite of Visitors
staying on the island was
Verb problem
apply
fluctuated
, Replace the word
fluctuating
visitors
staying on cruise ships chart as well as
the Total chart were similar to each other, however
as the Total rose start
from 1 and continued Wrong verb form
started
dramatically
soar in the period between 2012 and 2014, until reach 3.5 million of Fix the infinitive
to dramatically
visitors
, on the other hand
Visitors
staying on island rate was like wave with gradually rose in 2011 to 2016, slightly declined in 2016.
To sum up
I should analyse the last
one which is, the visitors
staying on cruise ships ,Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
hug
change between 2013 and 2017 Correct your spelling
huge
that is
was after a slowly decreased in 2012 , to reach 2 million in the end.Submitted by reem2006303 on
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