The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the
number
of people who travelled to various Use synonyms
museums
in four different countries ( Louvre, Use synonyms
Vatican
, Londra and Shenzhen ) over a Use synonyms
period
of 36 years from 1980 to 2015. Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be seen that Linking Words
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visitors
to the Louvre and Use synonyms
Vatican
Museum experienced substantial growth over 36 years of the Use synonyms
period
, Use synonyms
while
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visitors
to Londra science Use synonyms
museums
declined. The unit of measurement is millions.
In 1980, the Use synonyms
Vatican
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Museums
and Londra Science Use synonyms
Museums
were visited by nearly 5 Use synonyms
million
and just over 4 Use synonyms
million
respectively . Meanwhile, the figure for Use synonyms
Vatican
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Museums
saw a dramatic growth, reaching approximately 11 Use synonyms
million
in 2015. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
to London Science Use synonyms
Museums
remained stable until 1985, Use synonyms
then
, it dropped by one-fourth to above 3 Linking Words
million
in 1990. Use synonyms
Consequently
, it decreased again to almost 2.1 Linking Words
million
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at the end
of the Linking Words
period
.
Looking at the details, the Use synonyms
number
of travellers to Shenzhen Museum remained stable at just under 4 Use synonyms
million
during the 36 years of the Use synonyms
period
. They fell to over 3 Use synonyms
million
in 1990 and Use synonyms
this
continued until 2010. After that, it peaked at under just 4 Linking Words
million
in 2015. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
to the Louvre was nearly 8 Use synonyms
million
and it was higher than others at the beginning of the Use synonyms
period
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, it grew to about 9 Linking Words
million
in 1995. Use synonyms
Finally
, it experienced a modest decline , falling to almost 8.2 Linking Words
million
in 2000. Use synonyms
However
, it had a sharp growth, rising to nearly 10 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
at the end
of the Linking Words
period
in question.Use synonyms
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