The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the
number
of people who travelled to various museums
in four different countries ( Louvre, Vatican
, Londra and Shenzhen ) over a period
of 36 years from 1980 to 2015. Overall
, it can be seen that the
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visitors
to the Louvre and Vatican
Museum experienced substantial growth over 36 years of the period
, while
visitors
to Londra science museums
declined. The unit of measurement is millions.
In 1980, the Vatican
Museums
and Londra Science Museums
were visited by nearly 5 million
and just over 4 million
respectively . Meanwhile, the figure for Vatican
Museums
saw a dramatic growth, reaching approximately 11 million
in 2015. In contrast
, the number
of visitors
to London Science Museums
remained stable until 1985, then
, it dropped by one-fourth to above 3 million
in 1990. Consequently
, it decreased again to almost 2.1 million
at the end
of the period
.
Looking at the details, the number
of travellers to Shenzhen Museum remained stable at just under 4 million
during the 36 years of the period
. They fell to over 3 million
in 1990 and this
continued until 2010. After that, it peaked at under just 4 million
in 2015. Moreover
, the number
of visitors
to the Louvre was nearly 8 million
and it was higher than others at the beginning of the period
. Additionally
, it grew to about 9 million
in 1995. Finally
, it experienced a modest decline , falling to almost 8.2 million
in 2000. However
, it had a sharp growth, rising to nearly 10 million
at the end
of the period
in question.Submitted by ab.ciyani on
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