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the chart below shows the changes in three different areas of cime in manchester city center from 2003-2012.

the chart below shows the changes in three different areas of cime in manchester city center from 2003-2012.
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The chart below illustrates the popular types of
violation
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violations
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happened
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that happened
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 in Manchester
city
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City
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of
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over
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 the course of over a decade from 2003 until 2012.
In
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overall
, burglary shows the highest rate of crimes in 2004.
However
, a
noticable
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noticeable
declined
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happening
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happened
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 in between the four
years
 of
early
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the early
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 2000s, which went from a little over 3,500 and
decreases
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 to 1,000.
In contrast
, stealing cars
experiences
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experienced
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 little growth and shoplifting acts went down considerably. Breaking the law by burglary was a popular act especially in 2004, with around 3,800 thefts happening during
this
 period. Arguably, it somehow gradually decreased and had the highest drop between the
year
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years
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 2006 and 2007,
where
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when
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 the crimes remarkably
decline
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declined
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around
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to around
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 1,000
cases
.
On the other hand
, car thefts started with just over 2,000
cases
 in 2003 and
continually
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continued
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 to remain stable just below 2,500.
Nevertheless
, an upward trend happened during the early
years
 of
2010s
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the 2010s
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 and went up to 2,700 compared to the past few
years
.
Similarly
, the same trend happened to robbery in 2005, where it spiked by 500
cases
 gaining nearly 1,000
cases
.
But
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However
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, it dropped down and remained stable
to
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at
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 around 500
cases
 in the span of 5
years
 from 2007 to 2012. In summary, burglary acts
happen
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happened
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 to be the most popular act of crime throughout the
years
,
comparing
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compared
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 to car theft and robbery.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, cases with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreases" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • significant
  • fluctuating
  • anomalies
  • external factors
  • economic fluctuation
  • law enforcement strategies
  • societal changes
  • speculation
  • impact
  • data collection
  • reliability
  • interpretation
  • measures
  • strategies
  • broader implications
  • development
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