The graph below shows the sales of children's books ,adult fiction and education books between 2002 and 2006 in one country.

The graph below shows the sales of children's books ,adult fiction and education books between 2002 and 2006 in one country.
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The line chart gives information about how much money in millions of dollars was earned from the sales of three kinds of
books
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from 2002 to 2006 in a country.
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, what stands out from the graph is there was an upward and a downward movement in the number of literature sales over a four-year period. Looking at the details, as regards children
books
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experienced a significant increase from around $ 33 to $43 in the first year. Despite going up slowly for two years to approximately $46, it grew substantially from 2005 onwards and reached a peak at $57 in 2006.
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, the rise pattern was
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shown by educational
books
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that started to climb up from $23 to $32 for a year. Having decreased slowly to nearly $25 in 2005, it began to go up to the previous point
at the end
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of the time period. If we look at the details, there was a considerable drop amount of money gained by adult fiction
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purchased from $45 to $38, before it rose slightly to $40,
then
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it witnessed a steady decline from 2004 onwards to $30.
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