The diagram below shows a small local museum and its surroundings in 1957 and 2007.
The diagram illustrates a local
museum
and its surroundings in 1957 and 2007. Use synonyms
Overall
, many trees were uprooted and various facilities were erected around the Linking Words
museum
.
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First,
the previous local history Linking Words
room
was changed into a reception area in 2007. Use synonyms
Moreover
, a national history exhibition space disappeared and switched into a local history Linking Words
room
. The building was enlarged and a Use synonyms
museum
shop was added to the west side of the site. A Use synonyms
room
for the Use synonyms
museum
store transformed into a cafe. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, to the north side of the building, a Linking Words
room
for special exhibitions and education was added.
Numerous trees were cut down and a large car park was constructed Use synonyms
instead
. Linking Words
Due to
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this
construction, the previous car lane was knocked down. Linking Words
Likewise
, Linking Words
a long trees
which were located along the road had been uprooted. Correct the article-noun agreement
long trees
a long tree
In addition
, the garden area had been reduced and the entrance was moved to the Linking Words
museum
shop. Use synonyms
Lastly
, a hall for the entrance was demolished.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words museum, room with synonyms.
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