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The table shows the amount of total waste produced in million tonnes in six different countries in three years

The table shows the amount of total waste produced in million tonnes in six different countries in three years
The table highlights information about the amount of total
waste
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 generated in
million
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tonnes
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 in six various regions in 1988, 1992 and 2000.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the quantity of total
waste
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 produced sharply increased in the US throughout the period,
while
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 Scotland witnessed just under 10
million
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tonnes
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 until 2000. Looking into detail, in 1988, the share of total
waste
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 was the same in Ireland and Poland, at 10
million
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tonnes
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. The figure for Ireland jumped to 16,
then
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 decreased to approximately 10. There was a negligible fluctuation in Poland, declining to nearly 3 and rising to 18. Canada generated 20
million
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tonnes
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 of the whole
waste
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 in 1988. The amount decreased to 19
million
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tonnes
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 but in the latter year, increased to 29
million
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tonnes
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. As for the remaining countries, most of the total
waste
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 was produced by the US. The share of the US was more than 100
million
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tonnes
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 during the period and reached a peak of 209
million
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tonnes
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 in 2000. The amount of total
waste
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 was 15
million
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tonnes
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 in Japan in 1988,
then
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 it increased to 22 and 25
million
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tonnes
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 in 1992 and 2000 respectively. The figure for Scotland was very low, at 3, 2 and 5
million
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tonnes
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 in 1988, 1992 and 2000 in terms.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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