The charts above show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.
The bar chart compares the
number
of Japanese
tourists
traveling
abroad in the span of 11 years.
It is notable that in 1995 the Change the spelling
travelling
number
of Japanese
tourists
traveling
reached the highest rate. Change the spelling
travelling
This
is accounted at
approximately 15 million, exhibiting a higher Change preposition
for
number
than all the other categories provided. This
significant increase means that Japanese
tourists
traveling
rose dramatically in that period.
Change the spelling
travelling
However
, the lowest performance of Japanese
tourists
traveling
Change the spelling
travelling
in
1885, which stood at about 5. Add a missing verb
was in
This
huge drop demonstrates that Japanese
tourists
traveling
declined sharply notably at that time.
Change the spelling
travelling
On the other hand
, the line graph illustrates the percentage
of Australia
's share
in the span of 11 years.
The most significant rate demonstrated in this
chart is about 7%. This
indicates that the percentage
of Australia
's share
increased sharply, meaning that Australia
's share
reached a peak at the end
of 1993.In contrast
, the lowest point of Australia
's share
at
the beginning of 1885. As it reached about 0% Add a missing verb
was at
which
shows a huge drop in Correct pronoun usage
it
percentage
of Add an article
the percentage
Australia
's share
.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that the number
and percentage
of Japanese
tourists
traveling
and Change the spelling
travelling
Australia
's share
in both charts faced remarkable changes in the years mentioned above.Submitted by waell12 on
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