The table shows the expenditure on various types of food in one European country in 1992, 2002 and 2012
The table compares consumption of various
food
ranging from beef to milk in Italy in 1992,2002 and 2012. Fix the agreement mistake
foods
It is clear that
Beef had the most
average Correct word choice
highest
of consuming
Wrong verb form
consumption
while
Margarine and Coffee stood at the lowest points of usage.
The spending of Beef experienced a considerable increase from 45 to 54 million euros between 1992 to 2012. Besides
, the amount of Chicken consumption climbed tremendously from 38 to 56 units in two decades. The figure for Potatoes followed a significant growth of 7 units from 1992 to 2012.
However
Milk dropped moderately from 13 to 10 million between 1992 and 2002 but it showed a noticeable rise Add a comma
However,
by
4 units from 2002 to 2012. Butter increased slightly by one unit in Change preposition
of
first
decade and Change the article
the first
then
decreased slowly from 9 to 8 in second
decade. Change the article
the second
In addition
, coffee declined marginally from 9 to 7 measures in first
ten years and from 2002 onward it maintained the same level of utilization.Correct article usage
the first
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