The table data below shows the top ten Internet users by country in 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table data below shows the top ten Internet users by country in 2016.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table illustrates information about The top
ten
internet
users
of many countries in the world in 2016 and the data provides the number and percentage of
users
in each of the countries.
Overall
, what stands out from the table summary is that China has the most
users
of the top
ten
countries. The second was India and the 10th was Mexico.
According to
the 1st-6th from the top
ten
, the number of
users
was more than 100
million
. China has
users
at around 700
million
which was the peak of all
while
both India and the U.S. had approximately 400
million
and 200
million
.
However
, Brazil, Japan and Russia were similar at just over 100
million
.
In addition
, The 7th-10th from the top
ten
, there were less than 100
million
while
Nigeria was the highest in
this
group at around 86
million
.
Moreover
, Germany had just over 70
million
while
The UK and Mexico were as well at around 60
million
.
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