The diagram shows how leathers products are made.

The diagram shows how leathers products are made.
The diagram illustrates the operation of how accessories
such
as bags, shoes or sports equipment are made.
According to
the graph,
it is clear that
there are eleven stages of leather products. The process begins with drying the animal skin and ends with becoming accessories. Looking at the first process of leather production, the animal skins which are obtained from animals will be hung to remove the moisture of the blood and get rid of the bacteria by sunlight. They are being moved to the factory to be cleansed with mixed liquid, which is a combination of water and lime to remove dirt.
Consequently
, they will be put into pure lime water and flattened with a flattening machine.
Additionally
, the flat leathers are going through the soaking process again but now they soak them into tannin which is the water that combines with other vegetable matters to preserve the skin. In the eighth stage, the soaked leather will be polished to make it shine and relocated to the fabric factory to weave it together. After weaving, the finished products are ready for sale in the malls or supermarkets.
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