some people think cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to life in the countryside.Discuss both views and give your opinion

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that these days people can't
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decisions because that depends on their lives. The question is, more and more people believe
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in cities is the best,
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essay, I am going to discuss both
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opinion
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in cities are most popular.
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a city
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everthing
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everything
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you,
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, if you studying at a university you need to live close to your
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college
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, a lot of people
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Introduction
Start with a clear introduction that presents the topic clearly and your opinion.
Structure
Make sure to discuss both views in separate paragraphs to maintain clarity.
Supporting examples
Use examples to support your arguments for each viewpoint.
Conclusion
Remember to write a conclusion summarizing the discussed points and reiterating your opinion.
Grammar & Vocabulary
Check for grammatical errors and try to use a range of vocabulary appropriate to the topic.
Focus & Clarity
Keep your essay focused on the topic and ensure each paragraph has a clear main idea.
Balance
Attempt to discuss both sides of the argument.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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