The table below shows the weight of people in a particular country from 1999 to 2009. Write at least 150 words.
The table illustrates the
weight
of individuals in a particular country within a ten-year time
period
.
Overall
,during this
time
period
, women's overweight percentages
were less than underweight
percentages
but from the men's side, overweight percentages
were higher than underweight
percentages
.
On the one hand,women below weight
percentages
were almost constant,which were 27%,29%,and 28% respectively from 1999 to 2009.In contrast
,normal weight
percentages
were lit bit fluctuated between 47% to 51%.In addition
, overweight percentages
showed almost the same fluctuation as normal weight
,which was 3%. during this
time
period
.
On the other hand
,men underweight
percentages
showed only a 3% difference from 20% to 23% but overweight, percentages
showed an 11% difference,which was near about four times compared to underweight
in this
given time
period
.For normal weight
type,the fluctuation rate is half of overweight and that is
6% but from 1999 to 2004 this
particular time
period
showed 7% differences from 41% to 48%.Submitted by ashraftaukir on
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