The table and grap below show information about cinema visits in Auckland between 1995 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where releavant.
The given table illustrates a typical number of every age group
visited
movie Correct pronoun usage
that visited
theater
from 1995 to 2003, Change the spelling
theatre
while
the given graph chart highlights the detailed numbers for various age groups during this
time.
In 1995, the number of individuals who enjoyed movies in the cinema was recorded as 67% of the total with the average number of visits counted as10.3 times, which accounted for by 14-24-year-old individuals mostly. During 1997, 1999, and 2003, the percentage of people who visited the cinema occupied the same rate at 72% but the visiting counts average
were different 11.2, 7.3, and 8.3 respectively. In 2001, the largest percentage of people who visited the movie house during the given period Fix the agreement mistake
averages
with recording
80% and the visiting count was recorded as 8.4.
In terms of the age groups that visited the cinema during the given period, Verb problem
was
14
-Correct article usage
the 14
24 years old
group always took up the largest proportion of the total, Correct your spelling
24-year-old
while
50+ years old
group accounted for the least proportion during the given period.Correct your spelling
50+-year-old
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