Topic: The graph bellow gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The given graph illustrates some data about the proportion of how many of people living in cities in 4 Asian countries from 1970 to 2020, and it predicts the total population of them for 2030 and 2040.

Overall

, the line graph

including

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Philippines

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the Philippines

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, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia with an upward trend during the period.

The

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noticeable change occurs in

population

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the population

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of Malaysia from 30% to 83% in 1970 and 2040 respectively.

Likewise

, the percentage of Indonesia experiences the same pattern from 12% in 1970 to 62% in 2024.

According to

the line graph, the trend of Thailand’s population increased

19

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from 19

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% in the first year to 30% in 1990, and

then

approximately remained flat till 2020.

In addition

; it goes up to 45% in the

last

year.

Moreover

, the Philippines’ line began from 30

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and

then

leveled

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levelled

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off in 1980, and it had

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spurt in 1990 and reached

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50

percent

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per cent

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in 2000.

Additionally

, it decreased to 40% in 2010 and again increased until 2024.