Topic: The graph bellow gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The given graph illustrates some data about the proportion of how many of people living in cities in 4 Asian countries from 1970 to 2020, and it predicts the total population of them for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
, the line graph including
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includes
Philippines
, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia with an upward trend during the period.
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the Philippines
The
noticeable change occurs in Correct article usage
A
population
of Malaysia from 30% to 83% in 1970 and 2040 respectively. Correct article usage
the population
Likewise
, the percentage of Indonesia experiences the same pattern from 12% in 1970 to 62% in 2024.
According to
the line graph, the trend of Thailand’s population increased 19
% in the first year to 30% in 1990, and Change preposition
from 19
then
approximately remained flat till 2020. In addition
; it goes up to 45% in the last
year. Moreover
, the Philippines’ line began from 30 percent
and Change the spelling
per cent
then
leveled
off in 1980, and it had Change the spelling
levelled
growth
spurt in 1990 and reached Add an article
a growth
to
50 Change preposition
apply
percent
in 2000. Change the spelling
per cent
Additionally
, it decreased to 40% in 2010 and again increased until 2024.Submitted by abhari1997 on
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