The table below shows the population changes of several animal types from 2011 to 2016. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the population changes of several animal types from 2011 to 2016. 

summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the line chart provides the wildlife
population
changes of three different types of animals including bears, dolphins and
whales
between 2011 to 2016.
Overall
, the
population
of wild bears skyrocketed in the given time, whilst that of dolphins plummeted and that of
whales
fluctuated and
finally
went back to the original number in 2016.
According to
the information shown in the line chart, the
population
of wild bears was the fewest among the three kinds of wildlife in 2011 and their
population
soared from one
thousand
bears to almost 200
thousand
bears during the given five years which became the most.
By contrast
, the number of
dolphin's
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dolphins
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was the most in the beginning 150
thousand
and it reduced to zero in 2016. What should be particularly mentioned is the fluctuation of the whale
population
, which was 15
thousand
in 2011 and decreased to 50
thousand
after a year as the
population
of bears reached 50
thousand
in the meantime and that of
whales
witnessed a two-times growth by 100
thousand
from 2012 to 2013. After fluctuating in the rest 3 years, the figure for
whales
ultimately returned to 75
thousand
In 2016.
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