The table below shows the population changes of several animal types from 2011 to 2016. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the line chart provides the wildlife
population
changes of three different types of animals including bears, dolphins and whales
between 2011 to 2016.
Overall
, the population
of wild bears skyrocketed in the given time, whilst that of dolphins plummeted and that of whales
fluctuated and finally
went back to the original number in 2016.
According to
the information shown in the line chart, the population
of wild bears was the fewest among the three kinds of wildlife in 2011 and their population
soared from one thousand
bears to almost 200 thousand
bears during the given five years which became the most. By contrast
, the number of dolphin's
was the most in the beginning 150 Change noun form
dolphins
thousand
and it reduced to zero in 2016. What should be particularly mentioned is the fluctuation of the whale population
, which was 15 thousand
in 2011 and decreased to 50 thousand
after a year as the population
of bears reached 50 thousand
in the meantime and that of whales
witnessed a two-times growth by 100 thousand
from 2012 to 2013. After fluctuating in the rest 3 years, the figure for whales
ultimately returned to 75 thousand
In 2016.Submitted by s99104032 on
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