The diagram below shows process for recycling platic bottles.
The diagram depicts the different stages of
plastic
bottle recycling. The process requires too much effort and various sectors are involved in it.
Overall
, the recycling process consists of 9 distinct stages, beginning with putting plastic
bottles
in bins and ending with producing end products.
Initially
, plastic
bottles
are collected with the assistance of people and trucks. Afterwards, these plastic
bottles
are sorted by recycling factory workers. In the subsequent stage, sorted plastic
bottles
undergo the compressing process which turns them into blocks. Next,
the blocks are passed through a crushing machine to generate small particles of plastic
. In this
stage, plastic
particles are washed prior to producing plastic
pellets. In the seventh stage, the plastic
pellets should be heated to form raw material. Finally
, the raw material is used to produce some end products such
as plastic
containers, clothes and biodegradable bags. It is worth noting that such
end products are entered the markets and can be sold.Submitted by maryam.nutrition1988 on
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